Endless Perspective - Open Role Playing :: kaz olrig-eruslamia

dead rabit · kaz olrig-eruslamia (Sat Dec 17, 2005 4:17 am)

General Info

Name: kax olrig
Age: 23 years?
Weight: 194
Height: 5'10
Alignment: good. will go along with most things to save his own hide though

Bio

Bio: kaz, being born into a middle class family on the outskirts of the human kingdom has lived a good life. untill at the age of 18 he was drafted from his planet and into the millatary. he was already a supurb poilet. and the army sharpend his skills. even going so far to give him implants to sharpen his reflexes into something un human. matching even the vamps for their instant reactions. upon riseing through the ranks to major with a outstanding record he got him self a ship.

Weapons and Armor

Preferred Weapon: U.W. P30 magnum
Preferred Armor: pliot armor...?

Skills

enhanced reflexes- his reflexes (already great for human standards) has been enhanced to a point no human could reach without implants. he has a almost instant reaction to things. and with his short solid build it makes him a fairly good hand to hand fighter.

Magic/Ether:

Physical Skills: enhanced reflexes

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kaz's ship.

B22 fire bird.

the fairly old ship has been cancled. due to the compleate extermination of its factory planet. the ship (although old) is maintained as one of the best "blink" ships ever built. the term blink comes from how fast and agile the ship its self is. with a good pliot this ship can beat the heaviest armed ships. just by simply not being able to be caught. although being old and made when plasma was not yet perfected. the ship still fires metal projectiles. through use or MAG rails. it has two 50 cal. machine guns on the front. and one 30 mm. cannon on the bottom. in a turret.

ok....i changed it. better?

i suck at spelling..dont wail on me for miss spelling shite!

my kit.. 1 snare. 2 bass, hi hats (zildjians)3 air toms,2 floor toms,16"crash/ride(zildjian),16"crash(old zildjiad A series),and a 14"crash also zildjian =)

Angelus · (Tue Dec 20, 2005 1:41 am)

Several comments.
First, STOP CALLING ME VICKEY.

Second, The humans have a representative democracy, called the Galactic Alliance. (I'm open to suggestions for the name) Not, as you put, the "human kingdom". I'm not sure about conscription/drafting: whether the Alliance does that. I don't know, I'll have to think about that.

Third, your ship is too well-armed, as it would be under the "heavily-armed" part of the starfighters. 2 FIFTY caliber Mag-rails?! And then a 30 under the prow. Mag-rails can pretty much just punch through sheilds. Not a capital ship's sheilds, certainly, but that would just annihalate a starfighter. Tell you what, you can have ONE fifty under the prow, and have maybe two 30-cal gattling guns on each side. I have an artist's rendering that I'm working on. I'll show it to you tommorrow in art.
And the "jammer" cables seem highly imbalanced; way too strong. Plus, you probably wouldn't be able to use them, as space combat is highly fast-spaced, and very agile; the starfighters zoom around too quickly, and they could dodge those cables without too much trouble. And capital ships are too-well sheilded and protected for that to be of much use.

Fourth, what kind of ship is it? A starfighter, or a modified frigate?
And what size? Tiny or fairly large. Also, whether it is a on-man craft, with only enough room for a seat in the cockpit (like a jet fighter). Or like Millenium Falcon-sized. This is important.

So, Character: Aproved
Ship: Pending.

"You under-estimate the power of the Dark side"
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