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Odd poetry, don't ask or I'll eat you. (Sun Nov 06, 2005 3:56 am) Quote

First things first, a poem.

I felt myself wander
through universe
with lack of euclidean
I was going nowhere

I ended up where everyone died
I wanted to leave, to go outside
but they wanted me to stay
I wanted to say no way.

So I grabbed a knife
ornate and not unholy
I mutilated death
until he was a no more

And so I killed the death I could see
but the paradox came out and bit me
I devoured me down to the bone
but I couln't die , I couldn't go home

I wasn't in limbo
it doesn't exist
Since I remain
I still always was.


Marcus and Kexep wrote:
We must cross the river at all costs.

Switch wrote:
Gah, forget about the river



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(Wed Nov 16, 2005 10:50 pm) Quote

(blink, blink)


"I have the perfect body, but it's in my trunk and beginning to smell."
"I'm searching for myself, have you seen me anywhere?"
"You couldn't understand a hint if it jumped out naked, said boo, danced the macarina, and attempted to murder you with a rusty spoon!"
"When life gives you lemons, Find someone you don't like and squeeze it in their eye."
<(>.<<)
<(>.<)>
(>>.<)>
<(o.o<)
<(o.o)>
(>O.o)>
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<(^.^)>
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(^^.^^)
KIRBY DANCE!!!!!! ^_^

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(Wed Nov 16, 2005 10:53 pm) Quote

Run that by me again.


Marcus and Kexep wrote:
We must cross the river at all costs.

Switch wrote:
Gah, forget about the river



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(Wed Nov 16, 2005 10:58 pm) Quote

Sorry, I was just trying to figure it out. lol I do that sometimes.


"I have the perfect body, but it's in my trunk and beginning to smell."
"I'm searching for myself, have you seen me anywhere?"
"You couldn't understand a hint if it jumped out naked, said boo, danced the macarina, and attempted to murder you with a rusty spoon!"
"When life gives you lemons, Find someone you don't like and squeeze it in their eye."
<(>.<<)
<(>.<)>
(>>.<)>
<(o.o<)
<(o.o)>
(>O.o)>
<(^.^<)
<(^.^)>
(>^.^)>
(^^.^^)
KIRBY DANCE!!!!!! ^_^

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(Wed Nov 16, 2005 11:01 pm) Quote

Check your private messages by the way. Tell me if you figure it out.


Marcus and Kexep wrote:
We must cross the river at all costs.

Switch wrote:
Gah, forget about the river



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(Wed Nov 16, 2005 11:09 pm) Quote

Private messages? What's that? OO


"I have the perfect body, but it's in my trunk and beginning to smell."
"I'm searching for myself, have you seen me anywhere?"
"You couldn't understand a hint if it jumped out naked, said boo, danced the macarina, and attempted to murder you with a rusty spoon!"
"When life gives you lemons, Find someone you don't like and squeeze it in their eye."
<(>.<<)
<(>.<)>
(>>.<)>
<(o.o<)
<(o.o)>
(>O.o)>
<(^.^<)
<(^.^)>
(>^.^)>
(^^.^^)
KIRBY DANCE!!!!!! ^_^

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(Wed Nov 16, 2005 11:18 pm) Quote

at the top of the screen it should say "you have # messages


Marcus and Kexep wrote:
We must cross the river at all costs.

Switch wrote:
Gah, forget about the river



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(Wed Nov 16, 2005 11:19 pm) Quote

lol Denki. I am so unobservant.


"I have the perfect body, but it's in my trunk and beginning to smell."
"I'm searching for myself, have you seen me anywhere?"
"You couldn't understand a hint if it jumped out naked, said boo, danced the macarina, and attempted to murder you with a rusty spoon!"
"When life gives you lemons, Find someone you don't like and squeeze it in their eye."
<(>.<<)
<(>.<)>
(>>.<)>
<(o.o<)
<(o.o)>
(>O.o)>
<(^.^<)
<(^.^)>
(>^.^)>
(^^.^^)
KIRBY DANCE!!!!!! ^_^

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(Wed Nov 16, 2005 11:21 pm) Quote

your a noob, try to make any further posts relevant to the poetry.


Marcus and Kexep wrote:
We must cross the river at all costs.

Switch wrote:
Gah, forget about the river



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(Thu Nov 17, 2005 12:47 am) Quote

CJ Darkangel wrote:
your a noob, try to make any further posts relevant to the poetry.


And you're a meanie head. Razz

Very interesting poem. I'm going to be using this as a brain-teaser for a while.




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(Thu Nov 17, 2005 12:49 am) Quote

It helps if you look up some of the more complex words as not all of can be deduced properly from thr context


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(Thu Nov 17, 2005 12:56 am) Quote

Or just study the dictionary for fun like I did ;D



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(Thu Nov 17, 2005 12:58 am) Quote

That works i guess, online dictionaries are awesome.
Question: This post has been up for a few weeks, why are people posting now.


Marcus and Kexep wrote:
We must cross the river at all costs.

Switch wrote:
Gah, forget about the river



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(Thu Nov 17, 2005 1:10 am) Quote

Someone decided to post late, so I just kind of joined in because I could respond ;D

I meant a REAL dictionary...especially a trilingual dictionary (very rare)...



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(Thu Nov 17, 2005 1:12 am) Quote

I'm saying online ones are easier and have an infinite less chance of giving you a paper cut.


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Switch wrote:
Gah, forget about the river



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