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Rhiannon | Veteran Member
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| Random untitled poem (Fri Mar 24, 2006 12:50 am) |
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I've been kind of emotional these past few days, so this is a slight departure from what I usually write. It's written about my guardian angel, he knows who he is...
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Beautiful body
Tortured soul
My guardian angel
Spinning out of control
I’ll kiss your wounds
Heal them right
I’ll help you through
Your long night
Dawn will break
Bright and clear
Darkness all the good things
But love will make them reappear
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I don't know if it's all that good, I wrote it in, like, 5 minutes, but...meh. >_<
Last edited by Rhiannon on Fri Mar 24, 2006 12:51 am; edited 1 time in total
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Abbey | Official Grammar Nazi
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| (Fri Mar 24, 2006 2:59 am) |
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We should make that into a song 
(In other words, I like it )
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Rhiannon | Veteran Member
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| (Fri Mar 24, 2006 3:49 pm) |
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I hate the end, but if I didn't end it when I did it would have gone on forever.
I'm really bad at ending my poems. X_X
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Abbey | Official Grammar Nazi
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| (Fri Mar 24, 2006 9:23 pm) |
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As you've seen, I'm not too good ending things, either.
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